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I have been alive for nearly
twenty years; and yet
not a single moment
have I ever been
in love.
Twenty years of life; of
living with smiles and tears and
joy and sadness. Twenty years
I have spent in company of
family and friends and a comrade
like no other but
still-
no one to love.
Is this a selfish request
to ask of God- that I
should possibly find someone
to love
to cherish
to treasure with
my entire being?
Is this my fault entirely
to begin with- the tasteless
unappealing
jeans-with-checkered-shirt
over-tees-and-trainers
kind of girl that
I am?
I want to love.
And I want to be loved.
I wonder if that's too much
to ask. I wonder if I'm
being too greedy and
thankless.
I wonder if it's wrong
to simply wish to be able
to tell someone I love them
and be told they
love me in
return.
I have been wondering for
nearly twenty years;
how much longer do I
have to keep wondering?
twenty years; and yet
not a single moment
have I ever been
in love.
Twenty years of life; of
living with smiles and tears and
joy and sadness. Twenty years
I have spent in company of
family and friends and a comrade
like no other but
still-
no one to love.
Is this a selfish request
to ask of God- that I
should possibly find someone
to love
to cherish
to treasure with
my entire being?
Is this my fault entirely
to begin with- the tasteless
unappealing
jeans-with-checkered-shirt
over-tees-and-trainers
kind of girl that
I am?
I want to love.
And I want to be loved.
I wonder if that's too much
to ask. I wonder if I'm
being too greedy and
thankless.
I wonder if it's wrong
to simply wish to be able
to tell someone I love them
and be told they
love me in
return.
I have been wondering for
nearly twenty years;
how much longer do I
have to keep wondering?
Literature
Not my Valentine
A day for lovers, a day for her
Standing in the shadows I can see
A night for two, and a night with you
Cherishing now and what is to be...
A candle light dinner, made just for two
Walking, under the light of the moon
Hand in hand, and heart to heart
Back to the room, oh not too soon
Looking in your eyes, your lips collide
The mood is set, a flower on the bed
Soft light, music, and her skin of silk
A tender sweet kiss placed on lips of red
Her dress cascades softly to the floor
The air is filled with the scent of desire
Red lace and curves she's a lovely goddess
Taken with a lust that burns like a fire
Her night is so perfect, ren
Literature
Love
Love
Flower, flower
Sweet, red and mine
You make my world spin
You make my words rhyme
Blossom, blossom
How pretty you are
The te
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Love
Kiedy czujesz woń bezduszną utoń w niej,
bo serce potrzebuje tego nie głowa.
Ty nie kochasz tej miłości sercem,
ty jej nie rozumiesz.
Pozbądź się ciężkości,
pozwól sobie na to co najgłębsze.
A dojdziesz do miejsca w którym zrozumiesz...
Że miłość po prostu jest.
Wiersz mojej koleżanki. Pozwoliła na publikację. B.G.
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I don't know why I wrote this. I guess I just wanted to get the thought out of my head. And I know eighteen is still a long way away from twenty but fuck it; it sounded classier that way. Also I just wanted to say that I haven't written poetry in nearly two years, so don't criticise me too harshly if the beat's messed up or something.
Feedback is love, I guess? (haha)
Writing soundtrack: Scarborough Fair by John Renbourn
Feedback is love, I guess? (haha)
Writing soundtrack: Scarborough Fair by John Renbourn
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Well its spring at last... who isn't thinking about love!
This is a very well written pic, involving the problem we all have :the desire to love and be loved. I get the impression of a young girl living life but wanting more. the reference of the type of clothing is also very descriptive of the type of girl but does allow the audience to draw their own conclusion except in the fact as this {type of dress and type of girl} is the reason for not finding love. if I were giving advice instead of writing a critic, I would say "settle down, do what is wright, wait on God" and a grate deal more. However I leave that to other audience members. and simply say this was well written and worth my time to read!
Drop by my account some time and we will have a few more words!
Well its spring at last... who isn't thinking about love!
This is a very well written pic, involving the problem we all have :the desire to love and be loved. I get the impression of a young girl living life but wanting more. the reference of the type of clothing is also very descriptive of the type of girl but does allow the audience to draw their own conclusion except in the fact as this {type of dress and type of girl} is the reason for not finding love. if I were giving advice instead of writing a critic, I would say "settle down, do what is wright, wait on God" and a grate deal more. However I leave that to other audience members. and simply say this was well written and worth my time to read!
Drop by my account some time and we will have a few more words!